Great work Evie I really liked reading your poems. I especially liked the one that you wrote about your ‘annoying brothers’! I can imagine it would be very interesting living in your household!
Hi Evie, I particularly like your use of colour and images to enhance your poetry. You used a variety of great impact words. A point to think about is the darkness of some of your images make it hard to read the words. Investigate how you can change the transparency of the image to make it easier to read the words.
Great work Evie I really liked reading your poems. I especially liked the one that you wrote about your ‘annoying brothers’! I can imagine it would be very interesting living in your household!
ReplyDeleteHi Evie, I particularly like your use of colour and images to enhance your poetry. You used a variety of great impact words. A point to think about is the darkness of some of your images make it hard to read the words. Investigate how you can change the transparency of the image to make it easier to read the words.
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