This week for our 100WC we had to write a conversation between a man and a statue sitting on a bench. We had to write 3 drafts and improve it each time. We had to make it exactly 100 words in the last draft. I found it hard putting in the description and then writing it all over again and making it 100 words. It was a good idea to do 3 drafts because you can do it step and step until you're a pro!
A man was walking by and took a seat beside a statue. This statue was brown and had a top hat and a big beard. Then he heard the statue say,
“Well let me tell you something about me, I am a very famous man that sits here all day long.”
The man said,
“Where do you live?”
The statue said,
“I live here.”
Then the man looked up. He saw that he was talking to a statue. He looked around, people staring and saying,
“What a weird man that talks to a statue?”
Now the man was all embarrassed.
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